George Brinan A2 Media
Candidate No. 8149
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We recieved rough cut feedback from our classmates and teacher that gave us ideas for improvement as well as some positive aspects.
Positives
Music is very good
The start/buildup is good - Time of day and lighting
First scare is perfect
The voiceover is fine
Improvements
Storyline = Hard to follow
Need to remove some background noise
Lighting is a bit dim.
Enhance the scream
Remove the static sound at the end
Editing in the middle is not perfect
Living room is too bright
Titles/font need to fit the genre more
Try and make the news broadcast seem real.
Action Plan
The first thing we will work on is to make the storyline easier to follow, currently the editing makes it seem jumbled and that there is no plot. Secondly we will work on some of the sound in the trailer as there are some pieces of sound that are unnecessary or too loud/quiet, so they will need to be changed. Any footage that needs to be refilmed or added to will be filmed so that we can get the trailer looking as good as we can.